Auckland’s Biggest Secret

Harsh sea breeze lulls to

Sleep and silences giant

Volcanic dragons

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  1. I know you are following the syllabic content often presvribed, but its not the same as Japanese symbols. Can I suggest you remove ‘to’ from first line and ‘and’ from the second. The power icould be enhanced in an excellent Haiku. Just a suggestion with no offence intended

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